Chat with Lorraine

Lorraine gave a fresh pair of eyes over our work so far and make some really key points.

• The typography on the posters is hard to read due to colours and overprint
• The typographic layout of posters is not consistent with era
• Instead of looking the the filthy side of shoe polishing, look at the finished shine

From these comments we have already got ideas of moving forward before the crit so some of the feedback we receive will be outdated anyway. I think we could use a gloss finish over they typography as this would look like the clean version.