Floundering

"...many of the fine arts are even now floundering in self conscious and maudlin experiments."

First attempt
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Second attempt


Reflection
Again, I need to bring up the bottom text, and also this should move in a straight line, not up and down. The 'many' may need to change typeface or style to make it appear more different from the text and like a supporting bit of imagery. Instead of 'self consciousness' it should be ' self conscious' so this needs to change! Also I need to reconsider the typeface used to make it look more watery. The '&' needs dropping down too so that it sits within the frame, it looks uncomfortable overflowing the frame.

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